From 693dc9c2dc1dfc56dddaf5960054d844d0cc415d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hamcha <hamcha@crunchy.rocks>
Date: Fri, 6 Oct 2023 15:28:12 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] cleanup

---
 layouts/index.html | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/layouts/index.html b/layouts/index.html
index 0113422..c9c0fd1 100644
--- a/layouts/index.html
+++ b/layouts/index.html
@@ -22,17 +22,16 @@ site.RegularPages "Section" $pageurl }} {{- with $pages }}
 </header>
 <section class="intro">
   <p>
-    I'm your random internet dude and I figured that if I wrote something on the
+    I'm a random internet dude and I figured that if I wrote something on the
     Internet then someone might read it, also I needed a website cause everyone
     got one of those!
   </p>
   <h2>What's in this desperate corner of the net?</h2>
   <p>
-    In here you will find my blog where I discuss things that I give enough
-    thought to actually write long form posts about rather than just rant on DMs
-    and other resources that I've been publishing all over the place and in dire
-    need of a more permanent home. Check the links at the top or look below for
-    the latest posts!
+    Mostly my blog where I try to discuss and review things and other resources
+    that I've been publishing all over the place and are in dire need of a more
+    permanent home. Check the links at the top or look below for the latest
+    posts!
   </p>
   <h3>Miscellaneous link collection of ultimate destiny</h3>
   <p>